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i read your work by ~critmass:iconcritmass:



I am left handed,

but open doors like a white man,


I wont write or title anything about knees-

and  reserve  the patience of pollen in a beeless world,

I've  been advised by light to carry a camera whenevr possible so i

can misspell my insanity...


... so i can burn the abandoned cowboy boots to the collective... someone

somewhere has a compass with a weak magnet

and bare feet...


- critmass nov 25 2008
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:iconqueenhrosie:
holy shit flipping the bird i like that.

*!*

--
I hear
your voice
down the hall, through the window, above
all those trees, a light
it seems
& you are singing. What song
is that The words
are beautiful.

-LeRoi Jones
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:iconcritmass:
i read a quote by kerouac that mentions something about didturbing the birds nest- it reminded me of your work

--
its not too late to become what you were meant to be
:iconcritmass:
the bees knees! i get it now,... i think...

wait

wait


...no

--
its not too late to become what you were meant to be
:iconmello-dreamer:
well i'm somewhat confused by your comments on your own work. but i LOVE this poem...
"and i have the patience of pollen in a beeless world"
that's where you got me. great line.

--
mello
:iconcritmass:
i am worried about the pollen line

i found it on a piece of scrap paper in my desk drawer in my own hand writting but am worried i may have heard it somewhere else and just wrote it down because i liked it

but i think it was my own original idea

i just cant recall its origin

--
its not too late to become what you were meant to be
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